I made a lot of theses types of characters but sadly no sprites I just was wonder in you guys like them in if so ill make them into sprites. 😉

Last edited by Dripp_Jordan (2019-12-31 06:05:41)

Go for it bud. It's your work, you should definitely make more

Ciertamente, tengo que decir que el diseño no me convence, se siente sobre estirado, ademas de que la paleta de colores no termina de centar apropiadamente en el diseño.

Por otro lado, tendria que agregar que siento que estas desperdiciando en parte el propio tamaño de tu base al no agregar mas detalles al mismo.

Nice sprites, but you should make SSJ2 Goku angrier. And you should try to change a bit SSJ3 Goku's face to look more accurate to what it really is

El super saiyan 1 y 2 no se diferencian mucho 🫤

SSJ2's face looks more angry, look at that pic

Bueno.

Como la mayoria aca ya mencionaron, debes cambiar la expresion de goku en su fase de SS2
A esto, yo tendria que agregar que debes ensanchar la frente del SS3

Esto ademas de aquello que mencione sobre lo poco que aprovechas la altura del personaje y lo "estirado" que este luce.

Ty for the feedback I went and change the model and add some more details but the legs looks a little weird but ill continue to improve upon it!

Hay varios detalles que puedes mejorar aprovechando el tamaño de tu personaje.

Trata de expandir mas el pecho del personaje.
Tambien haz mas delgados los pantalones, recuerda que el personaje tiene pantalones grandes, no obstante no son tan abombados.

Por aca una idea sobre como podrias agregar mejoras.

Tambien toma en cuenta que el personaje tiene botas (olvide tomar eso en cuenta hasta que ya tenia subida la imagen. XD)

Well I change up the face and the hair tell me what i can improve upon!!

Last edited by Dripp_Jordan (2020-01-04 21:07:48)

Now it's the look of SSJ 3 the problem. When i see, i think at a sad man.

Sep, ese SS3 tiene un rostro triste...

No solo cambies su expresion; recuerda, en esa transformacion, la frente de goku se abulta, ademas de que desaparecen sus cejas.

I fixed SSJ3's not eyebrows and the pants

una forma para diferenciar las formas que tiene la serie, por lo menos en DBZ es que mientras pasa de ssj a ssj3 la ropa se vuelve más dorada y con sombras más pronunciadas, se ve cuando goku muestra el ssj3 contra buu o cuando se las muestra a Goten y Trunks.
-base: naranja rijoso
-ssj: naranja amarillento
-ssj2: más amarillo que el ssj
-ssj3: amarillo

Last edited by simplemente yo (2020-01-10 17:26:53)

nice character

I know its been a while but i finally made all the forms with the new body i made

SS3's face looks weird, I think th eyebrows should be like this:

or something similar.

To be honest this is the only thing that looks good for ssj3 but it just seems to stand out to much from the rest of the faces i made.

Last edited by Dripp_Jordan (2020-03-24 20:39:30)

That is an amazing face Dripp, that should be it, SS3 has always had a face that stands out, or you could change the other faces to look more like this one but with eyebrows of course which could be signified by having them be in colour for the other forms. The big difference between those faces and this SS3 face is you can't see the left eye, but if you ask me it looks better like that.

Last edited by LeonGjata (2020-03-24 21:58:26)

ok ill keep it like that thanks for the advice but i have one more question if you look at the hair in the older post you would see that i change how many colors i used from 4 to just 3 but if you guys could look and tell me which one looks better that would be great!!!