It's been a long time since I haven't sprited anything in this style. I'll most likely make a sheet of them after my current sheet. Anyways tell me what do you think about these and how I can improve them
la cabeza de frieza en su 3 forma se estira de más a mi parecer.
It's already the biggest sprite, I don't want to make a too big sprite
De principio, veo muy "cuadrado" al freezer en segunda y tercera forma.
Debes ensanchar su pecho y los biceps.
Tandria que agregar que me gusta el hecho de que retomaste la forma de freezer sin su bio armadura de su combate de vegeta, eso es un buen detalle.
Por otro lado, hay detalles que estas olvidando agregar, como el hecho de que freezer en su nave suele tener su rastreador de ki
ademas de que hay un detalle con respeto a golden freezer que ignoraste...
Al transformarse, freezer crece de tamaño, pasando de ser apenas mas grande que gohan a ser del tamaño de goku.
Edit:
No estoy seguro de si realmente tiene sentido acomodar a golden freezer en la misma lista de transformaciones que el goku de DBZ
En su defecto, recomendaria que dividas al personaje en dos versiones respectivas. Una para Z y otra para Super.
forma base (nave) → base→ base (sin armadura)→forma 2→forma3→forma final→forma final 100%
Forma base→forma final→golden freezer
I did Final Form Frieza a bit bigger than his 1st form, I'll release a v2 where I'll make some fixes and add some forms and poses (I'll also separate DBZ Frieza and DBS Frieza)
Here is the v2
En definitiva hay una mejora sustancial.
Noto que te tomaste el tiempo de agregar a mecha freezer,es un buen detalle aunque sea su version mas desapercibida y olvidable. 🙂
El cambio que hiciste en la segunda y tercer forma hace ver bastante mas detallados y definidos los torsos, me gusta.
En lo personal, creo que esta version tal y como esta queda bastante bien asi como esta.
Planeas hacer jugables estas versiones de freezer?
As I said I'll make those sheets after my current sheet is finished and I'll start with DBZ Frieza (I think I'll make Mecha Frieza at last because he isn't very useful)
1) Mecha Frieza should really be a separate character as he doesn't transform into it.
2) TOP Frieza should also be a separate character to ROF Frieza as it's weird to transform into your dead body lol. But luckily, all you would have to do is take the ROF sprite sheets, remove his first form, copy and paste DBZ 100% Frieza and add halos to all the sprites. Then you could also do DBS Broly Frieza with his Final form in the chair or his new recoloured first form design, Final form and Golden form but with no halos.
3) 3rd form Frieza should be hunched over as he never stands upright like that.
Apart from that these look great and ultimately it's up to you how to make your character. But this is just how I would do it if I had the time and skill lol:
Frieza (DBZ): 1st form chair, 1st form, 1st form no armour, 2nd form, 3rd form, 4th form, full power 4th form, battle damaged (when he got cut in half) full power 4th form Frieza (transforms when health is low)
Mecha Frieza: that's it lol, but his death sprite could be him splitting in half 😀
Frieza (DBS ROF): 1st form chair, 1st form, 4th form, Golden form (goes back to 4th when health low)
Frieza (DBS TOP): 4th form halo, full power 4th form halo, Golden form halo, battle damaged halo (his team-up with Goku against Jiren) (transforms when health low)
Frieza (DBS BR): 1st form no armour (when King Cold officially made him in charge), 1st form armour and chair (blowing up planet Vegeta), 4th form chair, 4th form no chair, Golden form.
Again you obviously don't have to make it this detailed but it's just some ideas you could use if you want to 😁 .
Frieza in his third form is not tall than his second form, right ?
His 2nd and 3rd form are the same height, but 3rd form hunches over because of his big heavy head 😀
Oh, okay 🙂
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