So, I made a Future Gohan sprite and in my opinion I think it looks really good. I would love some feedback though because this is my first sprite. It is still work in progress.

The forms are Base, Super Saiyan, Damaged, Super Saiyan Damaged, and Limit Break
I finished the character and here is the link:
https://www.txori.com/forum/doc/47357/1 … egohan.zip
I know it's not the cleanest sprite but for being my first character I think it looks good! Also, about the portrait, I am not good whatsoever at making portraits so I thought that would look good for now. I plan on coming back and revamping this character as soon as I get a bit better at making portraits and sprites. Until then, enjoy the character!

Last edited by FlameoHotman (2021-05-30 06:30:26)

Me gusta bastante la idea, pero me incomoda unas cosas que puedes intentar cambiar
Primero, veo que el sprite mide unos 14/15 pixeles (sin contar el cabello), puedes tratar de hacerlo de 18 pixeles para mejorar su ropa y detalles, además de sentirte más cómodo a la hora de hacer los demás movimientos.

Segundo, en la mayoría de casos esos ojos no quedan muy bien, puedes tratar de utilizar otros diferentes y cambiar la cabeza que le queda muy robusta.

Por último, siento que en las formas donde tiene el cabello base se ven muy aplanado, trata de hacerlo un poco más redondo en la parte de atrás y darle un poco más de forma a los mechones del frente.
Espero que mis recomendaciones te sirvan, buena suerte

@Fredmui Thanks for the feedback. I'm still very new at sprite making and have close to zero experience with it. I'll try to do my best!

So I made a taller Future Gohan with better looking eyes, and a rounder head. If you have any more tips then I would love to hear them! Here is the picture.

I made a few improvements to the sprite and started working on the animations. Although no matter what I do, the Super Saiyan hair just doesn't look like how I want it.

Any tips?

Finished the character! This character was really fun to make and I plan on revamping it once I'm better at cleaner sprites. The download will be on the main page.